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Post by Christian Soldier on Jun 4, 2007 10:28:06 GMT -5
So here's the premise: An alien detective finds a man murdered by an illegal weapon. Quickly he finds a suspect who admits to the crime...sort of.
The perpetrator explains that he had been commandeered by some unknown force. Oh, and he doesn't have the weapon anymore, whatever it was took it with ...er..it. The rest of the story involves the tracking of this demon and the subsequent battle.
I'm stll in the plannng phase, but will, hopefully, write it sometime either this week or next week. I'm using this as a test to see if the snowflake method will work for me. Hopefully not only will it, but I'll be able to ake some cash off it, too!
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Post by Jeff Gerke on Jun 4, 2007 13:33:30 GMT -5
Aliens vs. demons? Sweet. Kind of an Aliens vs. Predator thing going on. And, if I'm right in my paper called UFOs and the Christian Worldview ( www.jeffersonscott.com/nonfiction/ufos.htm) that aliens are demons, you've got something very interesting going on. "Aliens" fighting "aliens" (both parties of which are actually demons) was the premise for my Return of the Makers novel, which I never wrote more than the prologue for. Cool idea, Christian Soldier. Jeff
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Post by Christian Soldier on Jun 5, 2007 11:45:55 GMT -5
Hmm...I was going to go for the thriller ending, if I can manage it. Either that or the "Job well done" type. You know: the one that leaves you with this cool fuzzy feeling when your done.
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Post by Jeff Gerke on Jun 5, 2007 14:54:08 GMT -5
Don't let me take it in a direction you weren't intending. I was just letting you know what it made me think of. But do with it what you had intended.
Jeff
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Post by Christian Soldier on Jun 6, 2007 12:41:56 GMT -5
Lol, always. The story has it's own life now, what I say or think really won't affect it. So far, the snowflak method seesm to be paying off. I'll probably simplify several steps since it's only a short story.
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Post by dulci on Jun 13, 2007 11:31:15 GMT -5
Sounds awesome - definitely on the strange and interesting side!
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