Post by yoda47 on Apr 27, 2012 12:06:35 GMT -5
So I've been doing some critting over at the Sandbox, and the different ways people format dialog quotes has got me to wondering if I'm formatting them correctly.
I'll be the first to admit I don't know everything, so for the sake of me giving better crits (and for my own writing...) let's talk about how to use quote marks.
If you have a comment, please state a source (if you can remember one... if not, fire away anyway.)
My understanding is quotes are formatted like the following (examples from the as-of-yet unwritten third book in my Guardian Chronicles series (unwritten because I really should be editing the first two...). I apologize in advance for the crudeness and other mistakes in the following examples):
The way I understood "Self-Editing for Fiction Writers" is that lines of dialog should be on their own line (exceptions coming, hang in there...):
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"What the?"
Abigail stopped short as soon as she entered the engineering section of the Smelly Fish.
"This thing seriously has toggle switches?"
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I've seen that type of example ran together sometimes. My understanding is that you would put those all in the same paragraph (NOT put each piece of dialog on it's own line) only if it's a beat, an action tag used to control pacing and show motion that occurs at the same time as the dialog, like this:
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"Ug." Abigail reached out and used two fingers to gingerly lift a stained rag from the control console. "How long has this been here?" she asked, holding the rag well away from her.
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In fact, the above example probably isn't the most pure example of how to use a beat either.
So, am I totally wrong, partly wrong? Any other quote/dialog formatting comments for situations that I wanted to talk about but totally forgot?
I'll be the first to admit I don't know everything, so for the sake of me giving better crits (and for my own writing...) let's talk about how to use quote marks.
If you have a comment, please state a source (if you can remember one... if not, fire away anyway.)
My understanding is quotes are formatted like the following (examples from the as-of-yet unwritten third book in my Guardian Chronicles series (unwritten because I really should be editing the first two...). I apologize in advance for the crudeness and other mistakes in the following examples):
The way I understood "Self-Editing for Fiction Writers" is that lines of dialog should be on their own line (exceptions coming, hang in there...):
---
"What the?"
Abigail stopped short as soon as she entered the engineering section of the Smelly Fish.
"This thing seriously has toggle switches?"
---
I've seen that type of example ran together sometimes. My understanding is that you would put those all in the same paragraph (NOT put each piece of dialog on it's own line) only if it's a beat, an action tag used to control pacing and show motion that occurs at the same time as the dialog, like this:
---
"Ug." Abigail reached out and used two fingers to gingerly lift a stained rag from the control console. "How long has this been here?" she asked, holding the rag well away from her.
---
In fact, the above example probably isn't the most pure example of how to use a beat either.
So, am I totally wrong, partly wrong? Any other quote/dialog formatting comments for situations that I wanted to talk about but totally forgot?