Post by brianjones on Dec 2, 2009 20:23:36 GMT -5
My story is a superhero story, I don't know where that fits. The storyline is about a kid named Donnie who finds out that his his aunt was lying about his family being dead. He has a mother who became a villain and a father who lost his marbles.
His father and mother were superheroes. Superheroes on this world were to be the protectors of their world. They failed. Donnie's mother betrayed the heroes and let in a group of supervillains who had been imprisoned by the ancestors of the current superheroes. These villains were ultra powerful and dominated their world.
Heroes retreated with all the regular people they could save onto their hidden island. Now they wait for the inevitable.
Ordinary people hate them for failing and they lost most of their loved ones. Who do you think they blame? The superheroes are embittered that they lost and lost so many other heroes and now mankind has turned against them. So they hide in their sancuaries.
This is the setting for the start of the story.
Donnie finds out when he moves to yet another town with his aunt that his father is infact very much alive and was there not more than a few months ago. His father's identity was exposed so some of his fathers enemies find him.
He escapes with the help of some of his fathers friends. At some point he is visited by a member of a group of time traveling superheroes who's job is to police time. This guardian of time reveals to my main character that renegades from his group have gone back in time and ravaged time and Donnie must go back in time and stop them.
At some point Donnie loses the device given to him to go back in time to the villains. So heroes must revert to plan B, which is to trust a time criminal (not a supervillain but a antiquites theif who found a time traveling artifact from an ancient war between superheroes and villains. This he used to pilfer history before he was brought to justice by a hero who was a part of Donnie
s father's team
I have an too many Villains though, I have the time theif, Superpowered time villains and then a family who are corrupt superheroes who believe that the superheroes should dominate and control the average population.(Yes much like Magnito.) Though this came about by logical dediction and not by copy cating.
The bitterness of superheroes has set in and twisted many of them. I wish I could tell you though that this sin is origional to these superheroes but it was a big reason why their was an ancient war long ago.
These superheroes while having abilities beyond the lot of mortals are still human.
His father and mother were superheroes. Superheroes on this world were to be the protectors of their world. They failed. Donnie's mother betrayed the heroes and let in a group of supervillains who had been imprisoned by the ancestors of the current superheroes. These villains were ultra powerful and dominated their world.
Heroes retreated with all the regular people they could save onto their hidden island. Now they wait for the inevitable.
Ordinary people hate them for failing and they lost most of their loved ones. Who do you think they blame? The superheroes are embittered that they lost and lost so many other heroes and now mankind has turned against them. So they hide in their sancuaries.
This is the setting for the start of the story.
Donnie finds out when he moves to yet another town with his aunt that his father is infact very much alive and was there not more than a few months ago. His father's identity was exposed so some of his fathers enemies find him.
He escapes with the help of some of his fathers friends. At some point he is visited by a member of a group of time traveling superheroes who's job is to police time. This guardian of time reveals to my main character that renegades from his group have gone back in time and ravaged time and Donnie must go back in time and stop them.
At some point Donnie loses the device given to him to go back in time to the villains. So heroes must revert to plan B, which is to trust a time criminal (not a supervillain but a antiquites theif who found a time traveling artifact from an ancient war between superheroes and villains. This he used to pilfer history before he was brought to justice by a hero who was a part of Donnie
s father's team
I have an too many Villains though, I have the time theif, Superpowered time villains and then a family who are corrupt superheroes who believe that the superheroes should dominate and control the average population.(Yes much like Magnito.) Though this came about by logical dediction and not by copy cating.
The bitterness of superheroes has set in and twisted many of them. I wish I could tell you though that this sin is origional to these superheroes but it was a big reason why their was an ancient war long ago.
These superheroes while having abilities beyond the lot of mortals are still human.
