SciFi/fantasy

[israle]

would nybody enjoy this kind of story?

*Length:* 53,000

*Summary:* A man had signed himself up in 2012 to become a legend, someone who could defy almost every physical law. But the contract didn't say the catch: You only live for six months. In 2015 he wakes up. He doesn't remember who or what he is. As soon as he steps out of the beam o light that he woke up in, strange beings, objects and more are around him. He starts to dig deeper, find the meaning of why he is here, where the things that are odd are from-most importantly: who he is.

*Age Range:* 12-16, due to some choices that are made


Note: this is not a query letter

[Kristen]

There's not enough here for me to make a decision. I like to know enough about the main character to determine whether it's someone I want to spend time with. Look at the stories advancing to Phase 3 in the ML Select contest: All of the entries in the Main Contest and most of the ones in the Premise Contest have blurbs that say enough about the main characters to make you care about what happens to them.

[israle]

Okay, thank you, I will fix that.