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Post by newburydave on May 28, 2010 19:56:42 GMT -5
," said the wyrm, but his
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Post by Grace Bridges on May 30, 2010 17:24:09 GMT -5
face told otherwise. They drank
<dizzyjam, it looks like there's a comma and endquote missing at the end of your last post. Would you put them in? Thank you!>
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Post by tris on May 30, 2010 19:47:40 GMT -5
the bitter concoction, feeling energy
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Post by newburydave on May 30, 2010 20:11:43 GMT -5
transferring out of their
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Post by dizzyjam on May 30, 2010 20:35:29 GMT -5
bodies. Sleep overtook them and <<<Grace, I was noticing that too, but really that's on newburydave since I left it as an open sentence and he decided to end both the sentence and the quote. What he should do is put the proper ending punctuation that he feels the sentence should have with some quote marks at the beginning of his post following mine. If he doesn't, then I'll just catch it later when I do another collective post of the story thus far. >>>
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Post by newburydave on May 31, 2010 8:50:15 GMT -5
they dreamed of Brianna's bookstore. ============= <Harumph, authors! You can't leave a comma or a few quotes lying around anywhere without someone coming along and trying tidy up. I was planning to use Mark Twain's method, just put in a page of punctuation at the end and let people sprinkle it in to suit their tastes; but Nooooo, not with this crowd. Ah well I love you all anyway Cheers>
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Post by Grace Bridges on Jun 1, 2010 18:52:59 GMT -5
In the dream they saw
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Post by dizzyjam on Jun 2, 2010 5:20:33 GMT -5
pythons swimming in the air.
<<<newburydave, I gotta' love ya' man! You made me laugh out loud. Too funny!!>>>
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Post by Grace Bridges on Jun 3, 2010 16:31:21 GMT -5
Awaking, they finished their tea
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Post by tris on Jun 3, 2010 18:44:42 GMT -5
and asked the wyrm
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Post by dizzyjam on Jun 4, 2010 1:12:44 GMT -5
what had happened. Being sly,
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Post by newburydave on Jun 5, 2010 6:41:38 GMT -5
the wyrm said, "The Future
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Post by dizzyjam on Jun 5, 2010 14:57:17 GMT -5
is not what you make
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Post by tris on Jun 5, 2010 15:45:30 GMT -5
it through choices, rather
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Post by dizzyjam on Jun 5, 2010 16:27:02 GMT -5
by what you secure through <<<anyone posting that doesn't normally post should read the previous two pages worth of posts - as well as the guidelines on page 1 - as I like how this is shaping up and I don't want anyone ruining it; you might get ignored if you do that last bit >>>
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