Post by waldenwriter on Dec 5, 2010 17:58:30 GMT -5
In my British Lit class, I signed up to do a Creative Response to a work we read in class. I chose to do my response on The Canterbury Tales. I wrote stuff for all three of the approaches I pitched in my project proposal, but I liked this one the best and workshopped it in class:
www.scribd.com/doc/44558951/LTWR-308A-Writing-Project-Draft-2
Main feedback I'm looking for:
Suggestions for a title
How can I introduce more sci-fi elements? This was something I was told in workshop that I should do. Particularly, the end of the story contains the typical Miranda rights they read to you when you get arrested, and I was told I should make this more sci-fi.
I need feedback ASAP, as the final version of this project is due next week.
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Oh, and this is meant to be part of a larger work; my teacher told me that I could write an excerpt since writing the whole thing would be too long for the assignment. Here's how I proposed the story to the teacher:
The final approach I have developed for a Creative Response to The Canterbury Tales is somewhat more unusual. In this third approach, I would rewrite the Tales as a sci-fi mystery work, most likely in the style of a “police procedural” (a subgenre of mystery fiction that depicts the activities of the police as they solve a crime, an idea that has been explored not just in novels and stories but in recent TV series like Law and Order, Criminal Minds, NCIS, etc). In this story, the police (or sleuth, if it ends up being a more traditional detective story) would be investigating the disappearance of the passengers from a generation ship (a spaceship that travels slower than the speed of light to a far-off destination in space with passengers in tow; typically people are born, live, and die while on the very long trip, hence the term “generation ship”). The only way to discover the reason for the disappearances and who the culprit could be would be for the police to view stories the passengers have told to the others and recorded for posterity on hologram chips and deduce what they can from these holograms. Again, the basic character types from Chaucer would more or less remain in the characters portrayed, though with more modern equivalents and particularly roles reasonable for the founding of a space colony (which would most likely be the objective of the ship’s mission). I haven’t decided if this will end up as a murder mystery or not; that would be the predictable ending and I feel more inclined to go for a less traditional ending. Plus, the first (and so far, last) time I tried to write a murder mystery, it engendered harsh criticism from a writer friend of mine who read the first draft, so I am not particularly confident about writing a murder mystery anyway.
www.scribd.com/doc/44558951/LTWR-308A-Writing-Project-Draft-2
Main feedback I'm looking for:
Suggestions for a title
How can I introduce more sci-fi elements? This was something I was told in workshop that I should do. Particularly, the end of the story contains the typical Miranda rights they read to you when you get arrested, and I was told I should make this more sci-fi.
I need feedback ASAP, as the final version of this project is due next week.
***
Oh, and this is meant to be part of a larger work; my teacher told me that I could write an excerpt since writing the whole thing would be too long for the assignment. Here's how I proposed the story to the teacher:
The final approach I have developed for a Creative Response to The Canterbury Tales is somewhat more unusual. In this third approach, I would rewrite the Tales as a sci-fi mystery work, most likely in the style of a “police procedural” (a subgenre of mystery fiction that depicts the activities of the police as they solve a crime, an idea that has been explored not just in novels and stories but in recent TV series like Law and Order, Criminal Minds, NCIS, etc). In this story, the police (or sleuth, if it ends up being a more traditional detective story) would be investigating the disappearance of the passengers from a generation ship (a spaceship that travels slower than the speed of light to a far-off destination in space with passengers in tow; typically people are born, live, and die while on the very long trip, hence the term “generation ship”). The only way to discover the reason for the disappearances and who the culprit could be would be for the police to view stories the passengers have told to the others and recorded for posterity on hologram chips and deduce what they can from these holograms. Again, the basic character types from Chaucer would more or less remain in the characters portrayed, though with more modern equivalents and particularly roles reasonable for the founding of a space colony (which would most likely be the objective of the ship’s mission). I haven’t decided if this will end up as a murder mystery or not; that would be the predictable ending and I feel more inclined to go for a less traditional ending. Plus, the first (and so far, last) time I tried to write a murder mystery, it engendered harsh criticism from a writer friend of mine who read the first draft, so I am not particularly confident about writing a murder mystery anyway.