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Post by Edward on Dec 20, 2011 23:57:19 GMT -5
Greetings: In my first story, we (Earth) are discovered by another civilization but they are frightened by us and reluctant to make a first contact even though they are more advanced in many ways. You can read the first third of the story here if you are interested...if you do, please leave me some feedback, good, bad, or ugly. God's peace... www.smashwords.com/extreader/read/23954/1/the-prodigal-planet
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Post by Kessie on Dec 24, 2011 0:15:53 GMT -5
I read the first ten or so pages. Very interesting. I'll have to sit down with it when my eyes aren't fried. :-)
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Post by paulinecreeden on Dec 24, 2011 16:05:00 GMT -5
downloaded a sample to my kindle, thanks!
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Post by Kessie on Dec 24, 2011 17:48:11 GMT -5
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Post by Edward on Dec 26, 2011 11:15:18 GMT -5
Kessie:
Thank you for taking the time to read the beginning of my story. All feedback is valuable to a writer...I will act on it.
Merry Christmas!
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