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celesta
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How does this blub sound? May 1, 2012 9:58:44 GMT -5

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Post by celesta on May 1, 2012 9:58:44 GMT -5

I'm writing blurbs again. What do you guys think of this?

In this first book of the Kitty Castle adventure series, the princes and princesses learn the secret of the night cats. With the help of their own night cat, the children must stop dragons from ruining the kingdom.

The Kitty Castle Series is a set of beginning chapter books written for children in Grades One to Four.

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birdnerd
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How does this blub sound? May 1, 2012 17:31:35 GMT -5

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Post by birdnerd on May 1, 2012 17:31:35 GMT -5

I was going to say, "Wow, sounds mighty juvenile," .... but it's supposed to be.

I think your age range is a little too broad. There's a huge difference between 1st grade and 4th grade reading materials. Although I've used 1st grade materials to teach stuff in my 4th grade class... they hate it. I'd advise narrowing your field some.

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